Doumaaa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jordan's Metal]

hmmmm

this is strange, I would concentrate on better ideas for riffs, better melodies and stuff rather then unusual tuning. This lacks something interesting for me.. it seems kinda plain.

On the other hand, if there were good vocals it could change the whole song. Planning on writing lyrics?

All in all 2/5 and 5/10 - mostly for the part between 00:16 and 00:33, that could be a nice heavy part and for the drums. Most of my stuff needs drums or beats and I'm always too lazy to make them.

jordantupper responds:

thanks for the comments. I pretty much just made this as I went along adding drum beats and guitar parts to what I thought would come next. I plan on using the intro for a real song, just have to flesh it out and write some lyrics for it. I will post it once I have it finished! Cheers!

[Open The Skies]

mastering?

Aint the vocals a bit too loud sometimes? That's too bad cause I think it could've been a cool song..

Funzo123 responds:

To be completely honest with you, i don't personally think the vocals are too loud sometimes, I'm very happy with the end result.

[Grey Raindrops Turn Blue]

neat

slight rain with sunshine

Nayhan responds:

lol Thank you...

[Soul wings]

mellllooww

very nice, don't know if it's happy or sad.. but it's good :)

nattoman responds:

Thanks for the review.
the piece has undergone some impovment and you should listen to it now.
:D

[Traveller (loop)]

simple and yet nice

could be very well used a game, true

RyanPridgeon responds:

Cheers

[Burning Water]

yes!

awesome awesome awesome. I'd definitely go to a party with this kind of music playin

Firefreezer responds:

Hehe, great! Thanks for that! ;D

[The Pond]

haha

nice story :D does each part of it fit to a part of the song?

xXreddudeXx responds:

Thanks! :D And yes it does, each part of the story correlates with the song to try and make you feel like you were walking with me.

[Idea 21 (Demo)]

Make a full song ;)

It's good, as all of your stuff. It's a "happy" riff, I like those, as I find it hard myself to come up with them. Keep it up!

Firefreezer responds:

Okay, thanks for this review, I see what I can do! ;D

[Listen To The Silence]

wow

good job man! I didn't expect it to come out so well.. too bad I'm outta rhythm, I'd have used a metronome and tried harder if I knew back then.. thanks ;)

Firefreezer responds:

No problem dude! The rhythm was okay, I had no problems! Perhaps I will use some of your other riffs soon!

[Outside (Demo)]

Finish it

that's the first thing I thought about and then saw someone already wrote it.. good job man :)

Firefreezer responds:

Thanks dude! Hey, and also thanks for checking out my songs! I think I will use some of your other riffs too! =)

Greetz, TTK-335